Re: [Taps] TAPS WGLC: draft-ietf-taps-transports-08 - ends Dec 31

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I think these should be incorporated, thanks Colin, we'll prepare an update.

Gorry

P.S. Sorry your name was misspelt.

> Hi,
>
> This draft is in good shape. Some quick comments, that are almost entirely
> editorial:
>
> 1, 2nd paragraph: RTP can also run over DCCP, TLS, and DTLS.
>
> 4.1.1: “described further in Section 3.1 below” – but section 3.1 is
> above in the document.
>
> 4.3 (SCTP): “It is therefore deployed in all Web browsers supporting
> WebRTC” – actually, a slightly restricted subset of SCTP tunnelled
> over DTLS over UDP is part of WebRTC.
>
> 4.6.2: editorial - list formatting is messed up
>
> 4.8.1: the correct expansion of RTCP is “RTP control protocol”, not
> “ Real Time Control Protocol”
>
> 4.8.1: “The RFC-series specifies RTP media formats” should be
> “…RTP payload formats”
>
> 4.8.1: “RTP sender and receiver can send RTCP report packets.” –
> actually, “…will send…”
>
> 4.8.2: “multicast, anycast or IPv4 broadcast” – not sure broadcast
> makes sense, and isn’t anycast just a variation on unicast? (i.e., RTP
> is no more anycast than is TCP)
>
> 5: RTP is not mentioned in the bullet lists of transport service features
> - should it be?
>
> 8: my name is mis-spelt in the bullet on section 4.8
>
> Colin
>
>
>
>
>> On 29 Dec 2015, at 17:22, Aaron Falk <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>> Reminder: WGLC on this doc ends this week.  Please read the current rev
>> and send comments -- pro or con -- to this list.
>>
>> --aaron
>>
>> On Tue, Dec 8, 2015 at 9:02 AM, Aaron Falk <[e-mail]
>> <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>> This email announces a TAPS Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on:
>>
>>         Services provided by IETF transport protocols and congestion
>> control mechanisms
>>         draft-ietf-taps-transports-08.txt
>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-taps-transports/>
>>
>> Due to the timing (many people take time off during the December
>> holidays), this WGLC will run for slightly longer than usual - it will
>> be for just over 3 weeks, ending at midnight US Eastern (daylight) Time
>> on Thursday, December 31st.  Comments should be sent to the
>> [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]> list, although purely editorial
>> comments may be sent directly to the authors
>> ([e-mail]
>> <mailto:[e-mail]>).
>>
>> We're looking for at least a couple more reviews during WGLC - please
>> email the chair ([e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>) if
>> you're interested and willing to review this draft (otherwise, we'll
>> have to go "beat the bushes" for reviewers).
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> --aaron
>>
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