Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on the outline of the document
Fernando Gont <fernando@gont.com.ar> Thu, 27 August 2009 04:41 UTC
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on the outline of the document
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Hello, Toby, > I definitely agree that Joe's structure looks more organised. As he > points out, it is impossible to create a comprehensive structure that > removes all overlap or contradictions. If you want this document to > succeed (rather than join an ever-growing pile of RFCs that no-one > outside the IETF have even read) then making it easily readable has > to be the first requirement. A significant part of readability is the > structure used to present the data in the document. Before bringing this document to the IETF, most major vendors (including Cisco, Juniper, Microsoft, and others) received a copy of it, and had the chance to review it. Nobody complained about the document outline/structure. Actually, they were very happy with it. So I'd argue that *more* people from *outside* the IETF has read the document than the people that > It is always hard > as an author to accept recommendations that seem to alter one's work > so fundamentally but remember that other people are able to take a > step back from the detail in a way you, as an author, may not find so > easy. A few comments/clarifications with respect to your note: * My disagreement with the structure proposed by Joe should not be taken as me "not accepting recommendations". As a wg participant, I guess I can still have an opinion that differs from that of others'. That doesn't mean that I won't accept recommendations when they reflect wg consensus or are obvious improvements to the document. * The current version of the document was thoroughly reviewed during two years. Among the reviewers were many implementers, many of which are listed in the "Acknowledgements" section. *Lots* of changes were made in response to the feedback I got. Even during the last couple of months before the official release of the UK CPNI version of it, I added around 15 pages in response to the feedback I received. * I have always welcomed reviews of the document. For instance, I tried to get reviews from the people that were likely to object the document or suggest changes. e.g., I asked Joe myself to review the document (both this TCP one and the IP counterpart)... even before the first IETF Internet-Draft version of this document was published. I also asked Alfred (whose reviews usually lead to lots and lots of changes) to review the document, and I had to make lots of changes (in the organization, prose, technical contents, etc.) and even had to add more than ten pages at the last minute before publication to address virtually all his comments. Thanks, -- Fernando Gont e-mail: fernando@gont.com.ar || fgont@acm.org PGP Fingerprint: 7809 84F5 322E 45C7 F1C9 3945 96EE A9EF D076 FFF1
- [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on the … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[Verizon]
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … toby.moncaster
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Alfred Hönes
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … toby.moncaster
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[Verizon]
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Lars Eggert
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Joe Touch
- Re: [tcpm] tcp-security: Request for feedback on … Fernando Gont