Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-03.txt

[t petch <[e-mail]>]

On 22/10/2021 09:12, Yoshifumi Nishida wrote:
> Hello folks,
> The chairs are thinking that the draft is getting close to WGLC.
> We'll discuss it at the next meeting, but please share if you have any
> comments or concerns on proceeding this draft to WGLC.
>
> We appreciate your feedback

While this I-D has been slowly maturing, a rival model of more limited 
scope has made it through the IESG.  I commented on the different 
approaches and got some changes to bring the rival model in line with 
this one but not all.  I think that the authors of this I-D should 
review the relevant parts of opsawg-l3sm-l3nm in its final version and 
decide what to do with the differences.  Probably nothing but perhaps 
recognise and note that there are differences, if only implicitly, by 
stressing the approach taken here.

More parochially, is it time for this I-D to build on 793bis and not 793?

The web reference is insecure and ood.

The title in the reference clause is not that of the I-D.

The IANA COnsiderations do not follow the template of RFC6020.

Tom Petch

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> Yoshi
>
> On Tue, Oct 19, 2021 at 9:01 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions WG
>> of the IETF.
>>
>>          Title           : YANG Model for Transmission Control Protocol
>> (TCP) Configuration
>>          Authors         : Michael Scharf
>>                            Mahesh Jethanandani
>>                            Vishal Murgai
>>          Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-03.txt
>>          Pages           : 22
>>          Date            : 2021-10-19
>>
>> Abstract:
>>     This document specifies a minimal YANG model for TCP on devices that
>>     are configured by network management protocols.  The YANG model
>>     defines a container for all TCP connections and groupings of
>>     authentication parameters that can be imported and used in TCP
>>     implementations or by other models that need to configure TCP
>>     parameters.  The model also includes basic TCP statistics.  The model
>>     is NMDA (RFC 8342) compliant.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp/
>>
>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-03
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-03
>>
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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