[tcpm] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [tcpm] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education), and some nits.

Special thanks to Yoshifumi Nishidar for the shepherd's detailed write-up
including the WG consensus even if it lacks the justification of the intended
status and uses an unusual template.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,




### Section 1

   As such, TCP is implemented on network
   elements that can be configured via network management protocols such
   as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040].
AFAIK, NETCONF & RESTCONF can also be used to monitor/collect statistics. So
"configured" seems rather limited.

### Section 1 YANG usefulness

I wonder whether the paragraph containing: `Moreover, many existing TCP/IP
stacks do not use YANG data models.` really brings any value to this document.

### Section 1, orthogonal or not ?

   This specification is orthogonal to the Management Information Base
   (MIB) for the Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) [RFC4022].  The
   basic statistics defined in this document follow the model of the TCP
Is the model is based on the MIB, can it really be orthogonal to it ?


### listner ?

Is there a typo in "listner" ?

### Section 3.1

Perhaps a rendering issue, but "TCP-AO TCP-AO" is probably wrong ;-)

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