[tcpm] (Mini)Review: draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-00
Alexander Zimmermann <zimmermann@i4.informatik.rwth-aachen.de> Wed, 09 July 2008 14:18 UTC
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Hi folks, here some comments: page 6, 2**31/B: In my opinion a short reason or a reference why 2**31 and not for example 2**32-1 is correct would be nice. page 14, figures: The new (upper) figure is (from step 5 on) incorrect. TSval should be 65 in step 5, isn't it? Hmm, we have also two steps with number 5... page 15, paragraph 3: The last sentence is incomplete. page 34, point (b): It should be TS.Recent and not TSrecent, right? Regards, Alex // // Dipl.-Inform. Alexander Zimmermann // Department of Computer Science 4, RWTH Aachen University // Ahornstr. 55, 52074 Aachen, Germany // phone: (49-241) 80-21422, fax: (49-241) 80-22220 // email: zimmermann@cs.rwth-aachen.de // web: http://www.umic-mesh.net //
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- [tcpm] (Mini)Review: draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-00 Alexander Zimmermann
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