[tcpm] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)

[Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just some editing suggestions:

In Section 1:

   ... This is conscious decision as these parameters
   hardly matter in a state-of-the-art TCP implementation.  It would
   also be possible also to translate a MIB into a YANG module, ...

Need "a" before "conscious", and drop one instance of "also".

Section 2.1 should probably indicate that there are lots of places where
"I-D.ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis" in the YANG module will need to be replaced by its
final RFC number.

Section 5.2:

OLD:

   This document registers a YANG module in the "YANG Module Names"
   registry YANG - A Data Modeling Language [RFC6020].  Following the
   format in YANG - A Data Modeling Language [RFC6020], the following
   registration is requested:

NEW:

   The following entry is requested to be added to the "YANG Module Names"
   registry created by [RFC6020]: