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Re: [tcpm] WGLC for draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-10

Yuchung Cheng <ycheng@google.com> Mon, 21 September 2020 16:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tcpm] WGLC for draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-10
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On Sun, Sep 20, 2020 at 8:43 PM Theresa Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net> wrote:

> Dear TCPM,
>
> I just re-read draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-10 (after having provided feedback to
> -09).
>
> The draft has improved substantially and all my comments were addressed.
>
> So I'm in favor of publishing this document.
>
> One small thing I still found:
>
> In Section 7.4.2, the pseudocode uses a variable called ACK.seq. Is this
> the same as SEG.ACK in the same pseudocode? I think it should be an
> acknowledgement number, not the sequence number of the received ACK.
>
Thanks for catching that typo. for clarity will replace both ACK.seq &
SEQ.ack to
the ACK's acknowledgement number


>
> And small editorial nit:
>
> In Section 2.2, the numbered list has two items of "1."
>
wil fix in -11

>
> Best,
> Theresa
>
>
> On 10.09.20 00:50, Michael Tuexen wrote:
>
> Dear all,
>
> this e-mail starts the working group last call for draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-10.
>
> The WGLC runs until Tuesday, September 20th 2020.
>
> It is the 2nd WGLC on RACK, since the document improved substantially based
> on the feedback given during the 1st WGLC.
>
> Please send any comments, including indications to support this document,
> to the TCMP mailing list by then.
>
> The ID is available athttps://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-10
>
> Best regards
> Michael
>
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