Re: [tcpm] Comments on draft-ietf-tcpm-ao-test-vectors

"touch@strayalpha.com" <touch@strayalpha.com> Tue, 12 October 2021 03:38 UTC

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Joe Touch, temporal epistemologist
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> On Oct 11, 2021, at 3:15 PM, touch@strayalpha.com wrote:
> 
>> I find the term "NAT traversal" confusing in this context. As outlined in 
>> Section 9.2 of RFC 5925, "TCP-AO cannot interoperate natively across NAT/NAPT 
>> (Network Address Port Translation) devices, which modify the IP addresses 
>> and/or port numbers." The term "middlebox" used in Section 9.1 of RFC 5925 may 
>> be a better choice.
> 
> It should cite rfc6978 for the latter, and NAT is the term used there because this isn’t a generic middlebox issue.

Correction: there are two different features and they are ambiguously indicated.

The abstract should refer to middle box traversal (removing TCP options from coverage); the intro later describes NAT traversal, which omits the port numbers. The two are distinct and this has been clarified in the new text.

Joe