Re: [tcpm] Additional editorial comments on draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-20

Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com> Mon, 07 June 2021 03:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tcpm] Additional editorial comments on draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-20
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Thanks Michael, the fix you mention below is in my working copy of the 
next -23 revision, but I just wanted to point out that it looks like 
this is minor issue of extra indentation is from the original RFC 793.  
I'm assuming it's obvious that we want to fix it, and just pointing this 
out to the working group for completeness.


On 6/3/2021 5:47 AM, tuexen@fh-muenster.de wrote:
> Hi Wes,
>
> I found one more issue on page 79/80.
>
> OLD
>                 SYN-RECEIVED STATE
>
>                    If SND.UNA < SEG.ACK =< SND.NXT then enter ESTABLISHED
>                    state and continue processing with variables below set
>                    to:
>
>                       SND.WND <- SEG.WND
>                       SND.WL1 <- SEG.SEQ
>                       SND.WL2 <- SEG.ACK
>
>                       If the segment acknowledgment is not acceptable,
>                       form a reset segment,
>
>                          <SEQ=SEG.ACK><CTL=RST>
>
>                       and send it.
> NEW
>                 SYN-RECEIVED STATE
>
>                    If SND.UNA < SEG.ACK =< SND.NXT then enter ESTABLISHED
>                    state and continue processing with variables below set
>                    to:
>
>                       SND.WND <- SEG.WND
>                       SND.WL1 <- SEG.SEQ
>                       SND.WL2 <- SEG.ACK
>
>                    If the segment acknowledgment is not acceptable,
>                    form a reset segment,
>
>                       <SEQ=SEG.ACK><CTL=RST>
>
>                    and send it.
>
> The change is only the indentation of the last sentence.
>
> Best regards
> Michael
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