Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-13.txt

[Wesley Eddy <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Greg, I've made all 3 changes suggested below in my working copy.


On 6/14/2019 12:37 AM, Greg Skinner wrote:
> I found a few items while referring to this draft.  I hope the 
> feedback will be useful.
>
> §3.4:
>
> In the sentence "The principle reason for the three-way handshake is 
> to prevent old duplicate connection initiations from causing 
> confusion.” I believe the correct spelling should be “principal”, 
> because it is being used as an adjective.  (More information is 
> available from the definition of principal at wordreference.com 
> <https://www.wordreference.com/definition/principal>.)
>
> §3.8.6:
>
> The phrase “robustness principle” is used, but not cited.  While most 
> readers of the draft probably know what it is, others may not.  IMO, a 
> citation would be helpful, either from references already in the draft 
> (RFCs 791, 793), or others such as RFC 1958, §3.
> §7:
>
> s/alphebetically/alphabetically/
>
> BR, Greg
>
>> On Jun 3, 2019, at 6:25 PM, [e-mail] 
>> <mailto:[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions 
>> WG of the IETF.
>>
>>        Title           : Transmission Control Protocol Specification
>>        Author          : Wesley M. Eddy
>> Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-13.txt
>> Pages           : 104
>> Date            : 2019-06-03
>>
>> Abstract:
>>   This document specifies the Internet's Transmission Control Protocol
>>   (TCP).  TCP is an important transport layer protocol in the Internet
>>   stack, and has continuously evolved over decades of use and growth of
>>   the Internet.  Over this time, a number of changes have been made to
>>   TCP as it was specified in RFC 793, though these have only been
>>   documented in a piecemeal fashion.  This document collects and brings
>>   those changes together with the protocol specification from RFC 793.
>>   This document obsoletes RFC 793, as well as 879, 2873, 6093, 6429,
>>   6528, and 6691 that updated parts of RFC 793.  It updates RFC 1122,
>>   and should be considered as a replacement for the portions of that
>>   document dealing with TCP requirements.  It updates RFC 5961 due to a
>>   small clarification in reset handling while in the SYN-RECEIVED
>>   state.
>>
>>   RFC EDITOR NOTE: If approved for publication as an RFC, this should
>>   be marked additionally as "STD: 7" and replace RFC 793 in that role.
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-13
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-13
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-13
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
>>
>
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