Re: [tcpm] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-2140bis-09

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 25 March 2021 09:27 UTC

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Theresa, thank you for your review and thank you all for the following discussion. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

Lars

> On 2021-3-18, at 21:51, Theresa Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net> wrote:
> 
> Hi Joe,
> 
> Thanks for these changes, they look good to me.
> 
> Best,
> Theresa
> 
> 
> On 3/16/21 2:50 PM, Joseph Touch wrote:
>> Hi, Theresa,
>> 
>> FYI - v10 just posted.
>> 
>> Please let me know if this update needs further adjusting.
>> 
>> Joe
>> 
>>> On Mar 15, 2021, at 11:25 PM, Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com <mailto:touch@strayalpha.com>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> FWIW, an update is coming soon. Regarding one point below:
>>> 
>>>> On Mar 3, 2021, at 6:28 PM, Theresa Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net <mailto:ietf@tenghardt.net>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>>> For a better overview, maybe it would help if these discussion
>>>>>> points/considerations were grouped by the TCB value being discussed, and
>>>>>> possibly provided as a list?
>>>>> This is a useful idea; we’ll see what we can do in the next update.
>>> 
>>> Upon examination, this doesn’t appear easily possible, as there are different sets of options discussed in each paragraph and the sets overlap.
>>> 
>>> Joe
>> 
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