Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt

["Scharf, Michael" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med,

Thanks a lot for the detailed review. I went through all your comments. Most were straightforward to address.

Our suggestion is to clearly state that MPTCP is outside the scope of this model. MPTCP may need a different YANG model. Yet, the most obvious use case of the YANG model are TCP-based control plane protocols on routers (BGP, LDP, ...). At least I am not aware of widespread use of BGP over MPTCP.

Can you please have a look at -05 and let me know if -05 works for you?

The full diff is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-05

Thanks

Michael

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> Hi Michael,
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> FWIW, please find below some comments to the latest version of the draft:
> 
> * pdf: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-
> Reviews/master/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04-rev%20Med.pdf
> * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-
> Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04-rev%20Med.doc
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> I think that the document is almost stable. Thank you.
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
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> > Objet : [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions WG
> > of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : YANG Model for Transmission Control Protocol
> > (TCP) Configuration
> >         Authors         : Michael Scharf
> >                           Mahesh Jethanandani
> >                           Vishal Murgai
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt
> > 	Pages           : 23
> > 	Date            : 2021-10-25
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document specifies a minimal YANG model for TCP on devices that
> >    are configured by network management protocols.  The YANG model
> >    defines a container for all TCP connections and groupings of
> >    authentication parameters that can be imported and used in TCP
> >    implementations or by other models that need to configure TCP
> >    parameters.  The model also includes basic TCP statistics.  The model
> >    is NMDA (RFC 8342) compliant.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp/
> >
> > There is also an htmlized version available at:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04
> >
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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