[tcpm] Comments draft-touch-tcpm-2140bis-02

Michael Tuexen <Michael.Tuexen@lurchi.franken.de> Tue, 21 March 2017 12:16 UTC

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Dear all,

I just read the document and have two comments:

1. In section 2 the usage of ">>" is specified but ">>" is never used. I guess
   the paragraph can be removed.

2. It is stated two times:
   Additionally, TCB interdependence can be applied to any protocol
   with congestion state, including SCTP [RFC4960] and DCCP [RFC434],
   as well as for individual subflows in Multipath TCP [RFC6824].
   I think it should be made clear that information can also be
   shared between protocols. I also don't see why you can only do
   this between protocols having a congestion control. You might
   even want to share PMTU, MMS_S, MMS_R, RTT, RTTvar with protocols
   not providing a congestion control.

Best regards
Michael, as an individual