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Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.txt

Fernando Gont <fernando@gont.com.ar> Fri, 05 March 2010 05:37 UTC

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Hello, David,

>> If I were to s/were/was/, it looks like I should rephrase the text
>> as 'that a data byte that was received as "normal data"...'...
> 
[...]
> If there are 12 cookies for sale, individually wrapped, you would
> say: There are a dozen cookies for sale. But if they are being sold
> in a single package, you would say: There is a dozen cookies for
> sale.

Got it ;-)


> I think I've adequately explained my reasoning, so now you can choose
> which way to word it.  I'll be fine with whatever you choose.

As expected, I fixed all instances of data+plural.

Thanks for the English lesson... ;-) Being a second language, at times
it gets tricky....

P.S.: I've posted a rev that fixes this. It should be ready to ship.

Kind regards,
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Fernando Gont
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