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Re: [tcpm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7323 (6798)

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Subject: Re: [tcpm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7323 (6798)
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On 26/12/2021 08:59, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7323,
> "TCP Extensions for High Performance".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6798
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Yaakov Stein <yaakovjstein@gmail.com>

One AD once said that a MAY is the same as a MAY NOT and therefore is 
pointless.  Makes sense to me.  I find it hard to come up with a 
situation where 'MAY' has any value.

Tom Petch









>
> Section: GLOBAL
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> The Timestamps option may appear in any data or <ACK> segment, adding
>
> The timestamp clock may be derived from a system clock that is
>
> A random offset may be added to the timestamp clock on a per-
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The Timestamps option MAY appear in any data or <ACK> segment, adding
>
> The timestamp clock MAY be derived from a system clock that is
>
> A random offset MAY be added to the timestamp clock on a per-
>
> Notes
> -----
> several "MAY"s were incorrectly written as non RFC 2119 "may"s
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7323 (draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-21)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : TCP Extensions for High Performance
> Publication Date    : September 2014
> Author(s)           : D. Borman, B. Braden, V. Jacobson, R. Scheffenegger, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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