Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt

Hi Michael, 

FWIW, please find below some comments to the latest version of the draft:

* pdf: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04-rev%20Med.pdf
* doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04-rev%20Med.doc 

I think that the document is almost stable. Thank you.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : tcpm <tcpm-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Envoyé : lundi 25 octobre 2021 20:22
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> Cc : tcpm@ietf.org
> Objet : [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions WG
> of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : YANG Model for Transmission Control Protocol
> (TCP) Configuration
>         Authors         : Michael Scharf
>                           Mahesh Jethanandani
>                           Vishal Murgai
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 23
> 	Date            : 2021-10-25
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a minimal YANG model for TCP on devices that
>    are configured by network management protocols.  The YANG model
>    defines a container for all TCP connections and groupings of
>    authentication parameters that can be imported and used in TCP
>    implementations or by other models that need to configure TCP
>    parameters.  The model also includes basic TCP statistics.  The model
>    is NMDA (RFC 8342) compliant.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-04
> 
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> 
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