[tcpm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7323 (6798)

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Subject: [tcpm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7323 (6798)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7323,
"TCP Extensions for High Performance".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6798

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Yaakov Stein <yaakovjstein@gmail.com>

Section: GLOBAL

Original Text
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The Timestamps option may appear in any data or <ACK> segment, adding

The timestamp clock may be derived from a system clock that is

A random offset may be added to the timestamp clock on a per-

Corrected Text
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The Timestamps option MAY appear in any data or <ACK> segment, adding

The timestamp clock MAY be derived from a system clock that is

A random offset MAY be added to the timestamp clock on a per-

Notes
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several "MAY"s were incorrectly written as non RFC 2119 "may"s

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RFC7323 (draft-ietf-tcpm-1323bis-21)
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Title               : TCP Extensions for High Performance
Publication Date    : September 2014
Author(s)           : D. Borman, B. Braden, V. Jacobson, R. Scheffenegger, Ed.
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions
Area                : Transport
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG