Re: [tcpm] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)

"Scharf, Michael" <Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de> Mon, 05 September 2022 08:52 UTC

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From: "Scharf, Michael" <Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de>
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Thread-Topic: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Thanks a lot for these suggested changes.

As shown in the diff https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08, your suggestions have all been applied in version -08.

Thanks

Michael

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> Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07:
> (with COMMENT)
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> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-07: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Just some editing suggestions:
> 
> In Section 1:
> 
>    ... This is conscious decision as these parameters
>    hardly matter in a state-of-the-art TCP implementation.  It would
>    also be possible also to translate a MIB into a YANG module, ...
> 
> Need "a" before "conscious", and drop one instance of "also".
> 
> Section 2.1 should probably indicate that there are lots of places where
> "I-D.ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis" in the YANG module will need to be replaced by its
> final RFC number.
> 
> Section 5.2:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>    This document registers a YANG module in the "YANG Module Names"
>    registry YANG - A Data Modeling Language [RFC6020].  Following the
>    format in YANG - A Data Modeling Language [RFC6020], the following
>    registration is requested:
> 
> NEW:
> 
>    The following entry is requested to be added to the "YANG Module
> Names"
>    registry created by [RFC6020]:
> 
>