Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.txt
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.txt
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Hi Fernando, here some nits (04 version): Sec 1, para 2: s/secifications/specifications Sec 1, para 2 s/the the/the Sec A.5. para 2: s/behaviour/behavior Alex Am 03.03.2010 um 05:29 schrieb Fernando Gont: > David Borman wrote: > >>> If you agree, I can post a rev in the next few days, so that we ship the >>> I-D with all these tihngs fixes (plus the nit John Heffner has just >>> pointed out). >> >> That'd be great. So if anyone else has any final comments, get them in now! > > Heads-up: I've posted my working copy of the I-D (the upcomming -04 > version) at > http://www.gont.com.ar/drafts/urgent-data/draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-04.txt > > Please let me know if this one addresses all your comments (I think/hope > it does!). > > Thanks, > -- > Fernando Gont > e-mail: fernando@gont.com.ar || fgont@acm.org > PGP Fingerprint: 7809 84F5 322E 45C7 F1C9 3945 96EE A9EF D076 FFF1 > > > > > _______________________________________________ > tcpm mailing list > tcpm@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tcpm // // Dipl.-Inform. Alexander Zimmermann // Department of Computer Science, Informatik 4 // RWTH Aachen University // Ahornstr. 55, 52056 Aachen, Germany // phone: (49-241) 80-21422, fax: (49-241) 80-22220 // email: zimmermann@cs.rwth-aachen.de // web: http://www.umic-mesh.net //
- [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.txt David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Michael Welzl
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[ASRC AEROSPACE CORP]
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Anantha Ramaiah (ananth)
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Andrew Yourtchenko
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[ASRC AEROSPACE CORP]
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… John Heffner
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Alexander Zimmermann
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Borman
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… Fernando Gont
- Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.t… David Harrington