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[tcpm] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9293 (8126)

李志华 <lic721@163.com> Fri, 04 October 2024 13:04 UTC

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Subject: [tcpm] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9293 (8126)
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Date: Fri, 04 Oct 2024 13:09:52 -0000
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Thanks for your response.

In Figure 4 of RFC 793, SND.WND ranges from label 2 to 3.

In section 4.2.3.4 of RFC 1122, the label 3 may be  the "useable window".




so,  I think  "The send window"  may be a Editorial error, 

"The send window" may be label 2 and 3, 

the "useable window" may be label 3.




Best regards.











At 2024-10-04 03:00:58, "Michael Tuexen" <michael.tuexen@lurchi.franken.de> wrote:
>> On 3. Oct 2024, at 20:49, Yoshifumi Nishida <nsd.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> I personally think this errata is correct. The part in question seems to be inherited from RFC793.
>I totally agree.
>
>Best regards
>Michael
>> --
>> Yoshi
>> 
>> On Mon, Sep 30, 2024 at 9:14 PM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9293,
>> "Transmission Control Protocol (TCP)".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8126
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: zhihua.li <lic721@163.com>
>> 
>> Section: 3.3.1
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> the sequence space labeled 3 in Figure 3
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> the sequence space labeled 2 and 3 in Figure 3
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> In Figure 3, the send window shoud be 2(sequence numbers of unacknowledged data) and 3(sequence numbers allowed for new data transmission).
>> 
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>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC9293 (draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc793bis-28)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Transmission Control Protocol (TCP)
>> Publication Date    : August 2022
>> Author(s)           : W. Eddy, Ed.
>> Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>> Source              : TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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