Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework draft
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From: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>
To: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com>, Jari Arkko
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Subject: Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework draft
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Jie,
As I recall, this was suggested (I believe, by you) at one of the design team meetings.
Jari had answered this suggestion by stating that we should keep the list of “Authors” to a minimum and based on direct contributions to this draft (as opposed to text “lifted” from other drafts and RFCs).
In particular, there is a need to leave room for other authors and contributors to be listed.
Before we are done, we will obviously need to ensure that we have properly attributed all sources of text (I anticipate adding a paragraph – along with the usual “thanks for reviewing” paragraph – to the ACK section), but being an author of a draft/RFC used as a source for a subsequent draft/RFC has never been justification for being explicitly listed as an author or contributor in the latter draft/RFC. Otherwise, the list of “Authors” in any present-day draft would be very lengthy. We simply state that (some subset of the) text was taken from the earlier work.
Note that this applies generally to any text deliberately used from any earlier work. There may be small sets of words or phrases that have been unintentionally re-used, or are required either as part of the template or RFC Editor ID requirements, that will most likely not be attributed.
All of these considerations are – in part – why there is the IETF “Note Well.”
The “direct” contribution in this case was from John Drake, who provided a guide to how to re-use the text from the enhanced VPN draft to fill in the skeletal draft provided by Jari.
As Jari also stated, all participants in the weekly meetings – or on the mailing list – are contributors to this work. This is justified, because there is an opportunity for those participants to comment on the drafts in progress. The same is true for the definitions draft.
By the way, I am evaluating comments from at least two people (Xufeng and yourself) that were made on the mailing list for potential impact on the framework draft. Unfortunately, I am a little busy right at the moment. 😊
--
Eric
From: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong@huawei.com>
Sent: Tuesday, February 4, 2020 9:46 PM
To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org>rg>; teas-ns-dt@ietf.org; John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>et>; Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>
Subject: RE: Tools to compile the framework draft
Importance: High
Hi Jari,
Thanks for your effort on this.
I checked the current version of the framework draft, many text of VPN+ framework draft is reused in the introduction, framework and security considerations sections, this is good for the alignment between the two drafts. Then it would be reasonable to add the author of VPN+ framework draft also to the author list of this document. Thanks.
Best regards,
Jie
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Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework draft
I’ve finally managed to set up the framework draft compilation correctly. Struggled with some newer versions of tools. But the one I recommend and the associated makefiles work.
See the readme at https://github.com/teas-wg/teas-ns-dt/tree/master/framework<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=dbce027c-8747d86c-dbce42e7-0cc47ad93e2a-2b5fc923eca7e3c9&q=1&e=2f9bbdce-061b-46f3-87c3-307970015ce1&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fteas-wg%2Fteas-ns-dt%2Ftree%2Fmaster%2Fframework> for instructions; you’ll need to install make, kramdown-rfc2629, and xml2rfc but there are instructions. Then type make and the system compiles the .md to .txt automatically.
Jari
- [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework draft Jari Arkko
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Eric Gray
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Eric Gray
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Dongjie (Jimmy)
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Eric Gray
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Dongjie (Jimmy)
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Eric Gray
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Dongjie (Jimmy)
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Tools to compile the framework d… Dongjie (Jimmy)