[Teas-ns-dt] a new review of the isolation text
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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>
To: "Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)" <reza.rokui@nokia.com>,
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Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] a new review of the isolation text
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Reza et al, I like the new text (I looked at the GitHub version). The breakdown to three separate issues was helpful! A minor suggestion (clarifying the role of the technique and fixing one typo): OLD: For instance, dedicated resources can help assure that traffic in other slices does not affect a given slice. Simillarly, traffic separation can ... NEW: For instance, dedicated resources is one technique that can help assure that traffic in other slices does not affect a given slice. Similarly, traffic separation can ...