Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions draft wrt the organisation of material in the two drafts
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com> Thu, 05 March 2020 15:09 UTC
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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>
To: Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>, "teas-ns-dt@ietf.org"
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Subject: Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions draft wrt the
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I was quite conscious not to write too many words on these topics. But I do believe there should be something about them in the definitions – because * all through the document we use terms user, controller, slice controller etc. having some clarity was useful. * Similarly for SBI and NBI, in definitions we only say what their references are between what components. * Same goes for realization – it is trimmed down to 3 to 4 sentences. I can try to see if they can be trimmed down further, but will try to keep brief text in. will that be ok? [JARI] I’m fine with that but please try to keep the explanations to a minimum. I mean it is fine to have a complete and correct definition. But you should leave room for the framework document to, for instance, discuss what the role and interaction between the different entities are. Jari
- [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions draft w… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions dra… Kiran Makhijani
- Re: [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions dra… Jari Arkko