[Teas-ns-dt] comments on Framework
Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com> Wed, 08 July 2020 23:34 UTC
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From: Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>
To: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>, John E Drake
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Hi Eric & John, I have gone through till section 3.4 of the draft. Most of my comments are motivated by the discussions we have had in the context of definitions draft. Please take a look. We can go through them to see which ones are useful. My apologies for both - comments embedded in docx format and late posting. If time permits, we can briefly discuss them in tomorrow's call. Regards Kiran
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