[Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions draft wrt the organisation of material in the two drafts
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 February 2020 07:56 UTC
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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Teas-ns-dt] Some comments on definitions draft wrt the
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While reviewing some of the framework issues, I also observed the following: 1. The SLO definitions are now much better, thanks. The draft in general reads much better also. Good work. This doesn’t mean that there are no issues left, but we’ve made good progress. 2. The definitions draft has a section on stakeholders (or rather, components). The text in that section seems good, but feels IMHO to be doing things that the framework draft should explain. We should not have to explain a controller twice, for instance. Suggestion: Sections 4.2.1 (stakeholders) and 4.2.2 (interfaces) should move to the framework draft. 3. There’s a section 6 in the definition draft about realization. Can we move this also to the framework draft? Again, it seems unnecessary to explain everything twice in our document set. Jari
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