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Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com> Wed, 13 May 2020 13:41 UTC

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From: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>
To: Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com>, "'Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)'" <reza.rokui@nokia.com>, Shunsuke Homma <shunsuke.homma.fp@hco.ntt.co.jp>, LUIS MIGUEL CONTRERAS MURILLO <luismiguel.contrerasmurillo@telefonica.com>
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Subject: Re: [Teas-ns-dt] draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-02-comments
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Authors/Editors of draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-02:

              Please consider the attached revised and annotated version of your -02 version of this draft.

              This version shows markup for removing or modifying some highly contentious or questionable text and sections - including annotations as to why this text should be removed.

              It also includes comments and questions about other text that may not be necessary, or should be reworded.

              One section (section 4.1.1) is shown as removed, but Jari had made a couple of other suggestions about that text immediately prior to the last meeting.  I do not recall if there was any decision about these alternatives and I could not track down the meeting notes from that meeting.

              A key observation about this draft is that it is supposed to be a definitions draft - i.e. - it defines the terminology we are using or expect to use in other drafts related to this work.

              There is some danger in having the ambition to see "definition" as something we can stretch to encompass "specification" in this draft.

              It is important also to realize that the parameters and objectives of transport slice services listed in this draft are explicitly intended to be representative examples, rather than an exhaustive list - hence it is not necessary to include any for which there is no consensus to include.

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Eric

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