Re: [Teas] teas-yang-rsvp wasRe: TEAS WG Document Status Reports
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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com>, Tarek Saad <tsaad=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org>, "teas@ietf.org" <teas@ietf.org>
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From: Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com> Sent: 27 July 2020 13:29 Hi Tom, Thanks for your review of ID: draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp and for the your comments. We have posted version https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-14 Which addresses those comments. <tp> Mostly:-) You still have a prefix mismatch between module and IANA. I suspect you will get asked for examples at some stage s.3.1 The augments diagrams use 'o' to show augmentation. Other I-D use '>' but use it in different senses. My take is A----->B means A augments B. 3.3 I think that filters need references. Subtree is 6241 but XPATH is probably 8639 since that specifies the context thereof which is not obvious. Tom Petch Please see inline (look for TS) for more details. >>>>>>>>>> 2. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-11 Current Status: <tp> teas-yang-rsvp-12 would benefit from some tweaks Abstract confused me into thinking that the Extended model was elsewhere - I think that this needs an explicit mention. TS: revised abstract to address this. Introduction ditto. TS: revised Introduction to address this. Introduction should mention RFC7950 and RESTCONF Introduction should mention NMDA support TS: Addressed. 1 is wrong rt-type I am not familiar with but rt-types is in RFC8294 key-chain is RFC8177 TS: corrected. 2.4 lists two RPC but tree diagram lists three, one of which is authentication but authentication is a feature of extended not base - this confuses me TS: corrected and added the third. revision description should be 'Initial version' in both modules the rpc should probably be NACM default deny all TS: added. IANA Considerations URI lack registrant contact prefix are not those used in the modules TS: updated. Security alsocontrols TS: corrected. RFC5495 needs adding to I-D References TS: updated references. Again, thanks much for the comments. Regards, Tarek Tom Petch * Version -10 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments * Authors published version -12 which addressed all outstanding comments * Authors followed up with YANG Dr. reviewer on closing comments Open Issues: * None Next Steps: * Proceed to WGLC 3. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-te-07 Current Status: * Version -07 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments Open Issues: * Authors working on addressing YANG Dr. comments Next Steps: * Folllow-up with YANG Dr. reviewer to close on comments * Proceed to WGLC after addressing 4. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls Current Status: * Authors discussing augmentation of this module for MPLS-TP * A new module and model is expected Open Issues: * Close on MPLS-TP modeling Next Steps: * Publish a new revision * Ask for YANG Dr. review _______________________________________________ Teas mailing list Teas@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas
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