Re: [Teas] teas-yang-rsvp wasRe: TEAS WG Document Status Reports

[Tarek Saad <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thanks for your review of ID: draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp and for the your comments. We have posted version https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-14
Which addresses those comments. Please see inline (look for TS) for more details.

>>>>>>>>>>

    2. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-11
    Current Status:

    <tp>
    teas-yang-rsvp-12 would benefit from some tweaks
    Abstract confused me into thinking that the Extended model was elsewhere - I think that this needs an explicit mention.
TS: revised abstract to address this.


    Introduction ditto.
TS: revised Introduction to address this.

    Introduction should mention RFC7950 and RESTCONF

    Introduction should mention NMDA support
TS: Addressed.

    1 is wrong
    rt-type I am not familiar with but rt-types is in RFC8294
    key-chain is RFC8177
TS: corrected.

    2.4 lists two RPC but tree diagram lists three, one of which is authentication but authentication is a feature of extended not base - this confuses me
TS: corrected and added the third.

    revision description
    should be 'Initial version' in both modules

    the rpc should probably be NACM default deny all
TS: added.

    IANA Considerations
    URI lack registrant contact
    prefix are not those used in the modules
TS: updated.

    Security
    alsocontrols
TS: corrected.

    RFC5495 needs adding to I-D References
TS: updated references.

Again, thanks much for the comments.

Regards,
Tarek

    Tom Petch






       *   Version -10 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments

      *   Authors published version -12 which addressed all outstanding comments
      *   Authors followed up with YANG Dr. reviewer on closing comments
    Open Issues:

      *   None
    Next Steps:

      *   Proceed to WGLC


    3. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-te-07
    Current Status:

      *   Version -07 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments
    Open Issues:

      *   Authors working on addressing YANG Dr. comments
    Next Steps:

      *   Folllow-up with YANG Dr. reviewer to close on comments
      *   Proceed to WGLC after addressing

    4. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls
    Current Status:

      *   Authors discussing augmentation of this module for MPLS-TP
      *   A new module and model is expected
    Open Issues:

      *   Close on MPLS-TP modeling
    Next Steps:

      *   Publish a new revision
      *   Ask for YANG Dr. review



    _______________________________________________
    Teas mailing list
    [e-mail]
    https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas