[Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-09: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 20 June 2018 03:13 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-09: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-09: No Objection

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What is the goal of publishing this as an RFC? It seems like an intermediate
document that doesn't have archival value. I do not find publication of an
information model mentioned on the TEAS charter, but maybe I missed it.

§9: There are three upper-case SHOULDs in this section, but no RFC 8174 or 2119
boilerplate. Normative keywords don't really seem appropriate for an
information model, so perhaps they should be lower case?