[Teas] 答复: 答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt

[Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>]

Hi, Lou:

I have updated the draft to correct the idnits issues that raised by the idnits tools:
1) Use the reference in the abstract part------use the name of mentioned draft directly.
2) Editorial nits for one reference----correct it.

It is ready now for the submission to the IESG.

Thanks in advance for your efforts.


Best Regards

Aijun Wang
China Telecom

> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] 代表 Lou
> Berger
> 发送时间: 2020年6月8日 5:39
> 收件人: Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>; 'Dhruv Dhody'
> <[e-mail]>
> 抄送: 'TEAS WG' <[e-mail]>
> 主题: Re: [Teas] 答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt
> 
> Authors,
> 
>      Please let the WG know when you have your final revision ready for
> submission to the IESG.  Note, please ensure the idnits issues (see
> https://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-teas-pce-nati
> ve-ip-08.txt)
> are corrected in this final version.
> 
> Lou
> 
> On 6/2/2020 9:21 PM, Aijun Wang wrote:
> > Hi, Dhruv:
> >
> > We will update the deployment consideration section continuously in the
> following stages.
> > And we can also keep in mind that the existing mechanisms described in
> RFCs about PCE and their application in MPLS network can be reused in the
> application of PCE in native IP network.
> >
> > Adding the central control to the existing network is the trend of network
> evolution. CCDR solution described in this document can improve the E2E
> performance of native IP network that controlled by one administrator, and
> reuse the capabilities of existing deployed network devices in large extend.
> >
> > Thanks again for your comments and suggestions on this draft. We can
> discuss more on the protocol extension draft later.
> >
> >
> > Best Regards
> >
> > Aijun Wang
> > China Telecom
> >
> >> -----邮件原件-----
> >> 发件人: Dhruv Dhody [mailto:[e-mail]]
> >> 发送时间: 2020年6月2日 18:30
> >> 收件人: Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>
> >> 抄送: Lou Berger <[e-mail]>; TEAS WG ([e-mail])
> >> <[e-mail]>
> >> 主题: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt
> >>
> >> Hi Aijun,
> >>
> >> Thank you for handling most of my technical comments.
> >>
> >> Non-blocking note - I would encourage the authors to keep thinking
> >> about improving the deployment consideration section. I just noted
> >> some points from the top of my head (it was not meant to be an
> >> exhaustive list), I hope it could help you to think about adding more
> >> clarity on the scope of the experiment, provide high-level detail and
> >> maybe point to the PCEP extension for actual details.
> >>
> >> Thanks!
> >> Dhruv
> >>
> >>
> >> On Tue, Jun 2, 2020 at 8:03 AM Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>
> >> wrote:
> >>> Hi, Lou and Dhruv:
> >>>
> >>> The update version addresses mainly the comments from Dhruv. Please
> >>> review it.
> >>> Further comments and suggestions are also welcome
> >>>
> >>> If no other comments, can we ship this document out of the WG then?
> >>>
> >>> Best Regards.
> >>>
> >>> Aijun Wang
> >>> China Telecom
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> -----邮件原件-----
> >>> 发件人: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] 代表
> >>> [e-mail]
> >>> 发送时间: 2020年6月2日 10:25
> >>> 收件人: [e-mail]
> >>> 抄送: [e-mail]
> >>> 主题: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >>> directories.
> >>> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture
> >>> and Signaling WG of the IETF.
> >>>
> >>>          Title           : PCE in Native IP Network
> >>>          Authors         : Aijun Wang
> >>>                            Boris Khasanov
> >>>                            Quintin Zhao
> >>>                            Huaimo Chen
> >>>          Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt
> >>>          Pages           : 13
> >>>          Date            : 2020-06-01
> >>>
> >>> Abstract:
> >>>     This document defines the framework for traffic engineering within
> >>>     native IP network, using multiple BGP sessions strategy and PCE
> >>>     -based central control architecture.  The procedures described in
> >>>     this document are experimental.  The experiment is intended to
> enable
> >>>     research for the usage of PCE in native IP scenarios.  For this
> >>>     purpose, this document describe the Central Control Dynamic
> Routing
> >>>     (CCDR) framework and the PCEP extension is specified in
> >>>     [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip].
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip/
> >>>
> >>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08
> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-
> >>> 08
> >>>
> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08
> >>>
> >>>
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> >>>
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> >>>
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