Re: [Teas] draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp - Nit

Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr> Thu, 17 June 2021 02:53 UTC

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From: Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp - Nit
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Dear Pavan,

Thank you for reviewing the draft as a document shepherd and pointing out what to fix.
I have submitted a revised version, and a DIFF from the previous version can be found at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-07 https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-07&nbspnbsp;

I would like to thank you for your help in moving this document forward.

Best regards,

Jeong-dong





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Sent: 2021-06-15 (화) 20:09:59 (UTC+09:00)
Subject: [Teas] draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp - Nit

Authors, Hi!
RFC6372 was added as a Normative Reference in version 6 (while addressing LC comments). Please make it an Informative Reference (IDNIT).&nbsp;

Regards,
-Pavan (Document Shepherd)

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