Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Tue, 03 August 2021 10:42 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com>, TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo
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From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
Sent: 03 August 2021 11:30

Current Status:

  *  Received further valuable comments from Tom Petch.
  *  Received valuable comments from Kenichi Ogaki
  *  Posted updated version -10, to address Tom's comments above.

Open Issues:

  *  Authors are continuously working on addressing Kenichi's comments.

Next Steps:

  *  Follow-up to resolve comments.
  *  Welcome further reviews and suggestions.
  *  Working Group Last Call after completing the above.

<tp>

Some more editorial comments on -10

spring-sr-yang is now RFC9020; needs changing in lots of places

s.2.6 
'SR SMPL'

YANG module
'singling MSD'

'Adjacentcy'

s.6

missing solidus on the first path statement

Appendix B

Diagram might be better if a router-id could be squeezed in somewhere.

Tom Petch

Thanks,
- Xufeng


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