[Teas] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-25

[Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]>]

Hi Behcet,

Thanks for your review....

On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-??
> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
> Review Date: 2024-05-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to
> any
>
> mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the document
> is appreciated.
>
> The document is well written and understandable.
>
>
> Major issues:None
>
> Minor issues:None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have
> been cleared by Rev. 25.
>
> I list here the nits I found:
>
> Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence)
>
> Section 1.2
>
> this this document. (only one this is OK)
>
>
> The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2
>
> afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is
> used.
>
> Note. This is just a comment no action needed.
>
>
These have been updated -
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/

Thanks,
Dhruv