Re: [Teas] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)

"Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com> Fri, 26 October 2018 15:40 UTC

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From: "Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com>
To: Spencer Dawkins <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Teas] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Spencer,

Thank you for your review.

Sure, we will re-order the first and second section.

Thanks,
Rakesh


On 2018-10-24, 10:38 PM, "Spencer Dawkins" <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>; wrote:

    Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: No Objection
    
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    I agree with Ben's comment about the unconventional document structure. I'm not
    an expert, but I think I understood the Introduction well enough to get through
    it before needing to look at the terminology for precise meanings, and it does
    seem odd compared to the vast majority of RFCs I've reviewed, so somewhat
    disorienting for readers.