[Teas] [Errata Rejected] RFC9543 (7981)

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The following errata report has been rejected for RFC9543,
"A Framework for Network Slices in Networks Built from IETF Technologies".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7981

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Status: Rejected
Type: Editorial

Reported by: Mohamed BOUCADAIR <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
Date Reported: 2024-06-11
Rejected by: John Scudder (IESG)

Section: 4

Original Text
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IETF Network Slice:  The realization of the service in the provider's
   network achieved by partitioning network resources and by applying
   certain tools and techniques within the network (see Sections 4.1
   and 7).



Corrected Text
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IETF Network Slice:  The realization of the service in the provider's
   network achieved both by partitioning network resources and by 
   applying certain tools and techniques within the network
   (see Sections 4.1 and 7).




Notes
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There is a confusion in the TEAS WG whether the "and" is to be interpreted as "both ..and" or "or".

See https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/xejJJtuNtCeCZniUEhQkadb1i3k/ for more context. 

The NEW text makes the intent explicit.
 --VERIFIER NOTES-- 
Rejected per discussion on the teas list; see https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/lb2QilbMlon5kXctsJV4TQ3swkw/

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RFC9543 (draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slices-25)
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Title               : A Framework for Network Slices in Networks Built from IETF Technologies
Publication Date    : March 2024
Author(s)           : A. Farrel, Ed., J. Drake, Ed., R. Rokui, S. Homma, K. Makhijani, L. Contreras, J. Tantsura
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG