Re: [Teas] WG adoption - draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition

Shunsuke Homma <s.homma0718@gmail.com> Fri, 04 September 2020 13:48 UTC

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I think the definition you referred to in TS23.501 came from ITU-T (ITU-T
Y.3100) . And, I assume that the ambiguous definition brought this
confusion (i.e., the ambiguity allows readers to create their own
interpretations).
# It's obvious that definitions of IETF documents are consistent with it,
because everyone would refer to it.

3GPP has their more concrete concept of network slicing on the basis of the
above definition  in TS28.530. I think we also need to break down the
definition from IETF perspective and clarify our concrete scope.

Regarding slicing on non-TE networks, for example,  a network can be
logically separated with OSPF multi-instance or IGP Flex-Algo. Or, in some
cases, operators may lend whole physical links. Of course, in many cases,
it is better to use TE technologies. But we need not to limit the target to
TE networks, I think.

Regards,

Shunsuke


2020年9月4日(金) 2:13 Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>uk>:

> Thank you Eric for what is the clearest email to date on how we got to
> where we are. It helps me understand a lot better the questions we should
> be asking. I’m sure many of these questions were debated at length in the
> design team, but “we thought about it and came to a conclusion” is never
> the strongest argument to present to a working group, so we may have to
> unpack some of the compromises that were made in order to bring everyone
> along with the ideas. (I also hope that the compromise wasn’t reached on
> the basis of most of the team saying they didn’t like it and a few people
> digging in. But that will come out if the members of the team speak up on
> the list to say what they do or don’t like.)
>
>
>
> I appreciate the desire to be consistent with the terminology used in
> other bodies. There is no reason not to do that where that terminology is
> clear and where it is not in conflict with terminology already in use in
> the IETF. On the other hand, where the IETF is already using terminology we
> have to be more careful.
>
>
>
> It looks to me that the 3GPP has some nice core definitions in TS 23.501
> (I’m looking at v16.2.0). For example:
>
> *Network Slice**:* A logical network that provides specific network
> capabilities and network characteristics.
>
> That definition looks pretty much consistent with every definition I have
> seen in use in the IETF.
>
>
>
> The problem seems to come as we move from the abstract/generic to the
> specific. I believe it will always be the case that the concept of
> “transport” is a relative term. Any network that can carry traffic for an
> application or another network is (by definition of “transport” meaning to
> carry) a transport network. If you build IP networks then any sub-IP
> network is a transport network. If you build radio networks then you may
> see an IP network as a transport network. If you run IP over radio, then
> you probably see the radio network as transport.
>
>
>
> As a concept, then, “transport” adds value when it describes the
> relationship between network layers.
>
>
>
> But I think we find that the 3GPP definition of “network slice” embraces
> the wider and more general concept that we also need. That is, we need to
> describe the creation and management of logical networks that provides
> specific network capabilities and network characteristics. I don’t think we
> want to be limited to when those logical networks are specifically intended
> to carry traffic for client networks that are themselves network slices.
>
>
>
> If, as some people seem to argue, there is a need to constrain the
> description to be limited to just a specific use case of a network slice,
> then I suggest that is exactly what should be done. That is: define a
> network slice and get comfortable with that definition; specify the use
> case; describe how the generic network slice is used in that case; set out
> any limitations or additions needed to the generic definition.
>
>
>
> Two other small points:
>
>    - Igor noted how ACTN was renamed from “transport” to “TE” to ensure
>    it was applicable to all network types for which the IETF (and specifically
>    TEAS) could apply the technology. I agreed with that change and I think it
>    applies here, too.
>    - There may be a desire to apply the concept of network slicing to
>    non-TE networks (but still considering IETF technologies). I would be
>    intrigued to understand how that works without some form of ‘reservation’
>    of network resources and ‘steering’ of traffic. It may be that:
>       - The advocates of this idea should read (and contribute to)
>       draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis
>       - We should all think hard about where such work should be done
>       given the scope of TEAS
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Adrian
>
>
>
> *From:* Eric Gray <ewgray2k@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* 03 September 2020 16:20
> *To:* Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <reza.rokui@nokia.com>
> *Cc:* Igor Bryskin <i_bryskin=40yahoo.com@dmarc.ietf.org>rg>; Vishnu Pavan
> Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>om>; TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>rg>; Adrian Farrel <
> adrian@olddog.co.uk>gt;; TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>rg>; BRUNGARD,
> DEBORAH A <db3546@att.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [Teas] WG adoption -
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition
>
>
>
> Reza,
>
>
>
> It’s tempting to say that I agree with whatever it is that you said below.
>  :-)
>
>
>
> However, you’ve dived directly into a details-based explanation - where it
> is possible (or even quite likely) that your details-based explanation has
> a Ouroboros-like circularity that depends on how you’ve defined the details.
>
>
>
> Instead, I suggest summarizing the process by which we decided to
> compromise in using “transport slice” (or “transport slicing”).
>
>
>
> I personally thought (and - to some extent - still think) we should be
> using “transport network slices” - for at least the case where we are using
> packet-based (or other IETF supported methodologies for) connectivity
> services to support RAN and Packet Core applications in mobile networks -
>  mostly to be consistent with 3GPP terminology.  That was at least my
> starting position.
>
>
>
>                But we (the IETF) are already (and arguably have been for
> some time) using the phrase “network slicing” to refer to mostly technology
> (and layer) agnostic network virtualization.  That obviously applies very
> nicely in cases where we are talking *only* of IETF defined/maintained
> technologies.  For example: in DC networking.
>
>
>
>                But using “network slicing” in the mobile networking
> application clashes badly with other uses that apply in the same space.
> For example: 3GPP defines "network slices" as originating on a UE, and
> terminating on a UPF (and vice-versa) and these “network slices” have to be
> carried (i.e. - "transported”) over the slices provided for that purpose by
> what 3GPP consistently refers to as a “Transport Network.”  It is possible
> that 3GPP (or mobile operators) may extend usage to include “network
> slices” that extend from one or more UEs to one or more other UEs, through
> one or more (essentially concatenated) UPFs - but dealing with this case is
> not essential (or arguably even useful) to understanding requirements of
> the mobile network application in general.
>
>
>
>                On top of that, in the mobile networking application,
> there is no presumption that a “transport network” will be anything that
> the IETF defines or maintains.  Microwave technology is - for instance - a
> technology that many mobile operators go to first (or at least most often)
> in providing “transport” for a mobile operator’s RAN traffic (including
> network slices), and obviously these services have previously been (and
> will for some time be) provided using some form of synchronous optical
> networking (which is a driver for some of the interest in TDM-like
> “transport services”).
>
>
>
>                So there are multiple dimensions to this naming choice,
> and I don’t think anyone will be completely satisfied with any name we
> select.
>
>
>
>                To the extent possible, we should try to define a
> northbound interface generic enough to support any technology - including
> largely those that are defined/maintained by the IETF - while trying to
> avoid naming ambiguity to the extent possible.  And we should try to
> include sufficient flexibility to support “carrying” (i.e. - “transport”)
> of "network slices" as we have defined them in the IETF.
>
>
>
>                We cannot actually use the phrase “network slices” (or
> “network slicing”) for all of the cases, as that will be far too ambiguous
> and will lead to the need to “qualify” every usage to remove the inherent
> ambiguity we would be creating.
>
>
>
>                Hence the compromise of using “transport slice.”  I don’t
> like it, and I am not alone in that - but that is pretty much the
> definition of what a “compromise” is.
>
>
>
> —
>
> Eric
>
>
>
> On Sep 3, 2020, at 10:35 AM, Rokui, Reza (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <
> reza.rokui@nokia.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> Hi Deborah,
>
>                 >>>>> Why are you excluding RAN? RAW is already doing IP
> solutions, SG15 has RAN transport solutions for IP. IP is already in the
> RAN.
>
>
>
> We are not excluding the RAN. This is the explanation.
>
> RAN NEs has two logical components, Radio and Transport. When I mentioned
> in my previous email that a “*5G network slice* has RAN Slice, Transport
> Slice and Core slice, I refer to the Radio portion of the RAN.
>
> The transport portion of the RAN can be consider as part of the transport
> slice. This is clearly pointed out in the draft with definition of
> Transport Slice Endpoint (TSE). Please see picture below where for example
> the TSE could be the endpoint inside the Transport portion of the RAN.
>
>
>
> <image001.png>
>
>
>
> Hi Igor,
>
>                 >>>> I agree with Deborah and Adrian that at least some
> terms defined in this work could have been borrowed from other TEAS WG work.
>
>
>
> You have a valid point of using the exiting IETF terms as much as we can.
> And this was the intention of the draft authors.
>
> Having said that, It is important to consider that the operator can
> realize a “Transport Slice” in a TE or NON-TE network. They can even
> realize a transport slice in NON-IP/MPLS network (like PON).
>
> The point is that the  transport slice is not necessarily associated to a
> TE network.
>
> As pointed out in the draft, the realize of a transport slice can be in
>  TE network and any IETF models/works can be utilized for realization.
>
>
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
>
>
> Reza
>
>
>
>
>
> *From: *Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Igor Bryskin <
> i_bryskin=40yahoo.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> *Date: *Wednesday, September 2, 2020 at 11:14 AM
> *To: *'Vishnu Pavan Beeram' <vishnupavan@gmail.com>om>, 'TEAS WG' <
> teas@ietf.org>gt;, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
> *Cc: *'TEAS WG Chairs' <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [Teas] WG adoption -
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition
>
>
>
> Hi,
>
>
>
> I agree with Deborah and Adrian that at least some terms defined in this
> work could have been borrowed from other TEAS WG work.
>
> For example, I may have missed some discussions, but I still do not see
> much difference between transport slice as defined and an abstract network
> topology defined/configured by a client and provided as a service by the
> server as defined in network topology model family. If we could agree that
> the two are at least close cousins, the life would get much simpler IMHO.
>
>
>
> Igor
>
>
>
> On Tuesday, September 1, 2020, 5:36:39 PM EDT, Adrian Farrel <
> adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:
>
>
>
>
>
> Hi,
>
>
>
> I've reviewed this document as part of the adoption poll. My review has
>
> been partially overtaken by threads on the list. Sorry about that, but
>
> it is a lengthy review.
>
>
>
> I'd like to start by thanking the design team for tackling the thorny
>
> subject of terminology, and the authors of this draft for pulling
>
> together the various opinions of the team so that we, the working group,
>
> can do the easier task of reviewing the material.
>
>
>
> I'm aware that the conditions for WG adoption specifically do not
>
> include that the document should be perfect. But it is important that
>
> the work is clear enough and sufficiently on message that we can work
>
> out what it is for and why we might adopt it.
>
>
>
> In my review, below, I raise a number of points that I think are quite
>
> serious and need to be addressed before we can look at the document
>
> properly and decide whether or not to adopt it. These points call into
>
> question what is actually being defined. That is, I am reserving
>
> judgement and not saying "adopt once these issues are fixed."
>
>
>
> Above all, I see no benefit to a document that defines a term that seems
>
> to have no particular benefit or use. We know that underlay networks
>
> carry traffic for overlay networks. We know that virtualisation can be
>
> done at different technology levels and that networks can be arranged
>
> hierarchically or stitched together with abstraction and adaptation.
>
> We know that an underlay network can be sliced. What additional benefit
>
> is the definition of the term "Transport Slice" bring? It looks that the
>
> composed end-to-end transport slice is another term for a virtual
>
> network, where at the lowest level a transport slide seems to be a
>
> network slice. This question has to be answered before I can support
>
> adoption.
>
>
>
> Finally, I want to say that we often decide to adopt a document on the
>
> understanding that we can fix it up later. But in this case I am very
>
> concerned that adopting this document would be interpreted as the
>
> acceptance of the concept of a transport slice without agreement on
>
> what it is or why we want it. That would surely lead us into a very
>
> difficult place where debate about the document would be hard to
>
> progress.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Adrian
>
>
>
> ===
>
>
>
> I brought up my concern about the use of the term "Transport" around
>
> IETF-106 and it still bothers me. The Abstract says "...the definition
>
> of a slice in the transport networks" but since that term is not common
>
> in the IETF (or rather, it has two very specific meanings neither of
>
> which is intended here) the Abstract fails in its goal "to bring
>
> clarity".
>
>
>
> A more accurate Abstract might be:
>
>
>
>    This document provides a definition of the term "Transport Slice" for
>
>    use within the IETF and specifically within other IETF documents that
>
>    describe aspects of network slicing.
>
>
>
>    The document also describes the characteristics of a transport slice,
>
>    describes related terms and their meanings, and explains how
>
>    transport slices can be used in combination with end to end network
>
>    slices or independent of them.
>
>
>
> Section 3 goes on to reference RFC 5921 to give basis for use of the
>
> word "transport". In view of this, it might be interesting to examine
>
> how any network slice can be anything other than a transport slice. That
>
> will lead to a discussion about why this document needs to be separate
>
> from the slicing framework draft. The answers to these questions would
>
> usefully be placed in the document.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1
>
>
>
>    A number of use cases benefit from establishing network connectivity
>
>    providing transport and assurance of a specific set of network
>
>    resources.
>
>
>
> I cannot understand this sentence. What does it mean to "provide
>
> transport"? Transport of what? And, is there a punctuation issue or does
>
> the text mean "transport of network resources"?
>
>
>
> What does "assurance of network resources" mean?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1
>
>
>
>
>
>    In this document, as detailed in the subsequent sections,
>
>    we refer to this connectivity and resource commitment as the
>
>    transport slice.
>
>
>
> It is unhelpful to include this text here. Is this the normative
>
> definition of a transport slice or just a passing comment?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1
>
>
>
>    Services that might benefit from the transport
>
>    slices include but not limited to:
>
>
>
> Since this assertion is unsubstantiated and expressed as a speculation
>
> it reads like marketing! I suspect we don't need it or the list of
>
> bullets, but maybe you could insert forward references to the sections
>
> that describe the use cases and how a transport slice might be
>
> beneficial in those cases (those would be sections yet to be written).
>
> If, as you seem to imply, the reason for this document is to describe
>
> a term for a concept that has value in certain deployments, I think it
>
> is incumbent on you to describe those cases.
>
>
>
> I would recommend throwing out the whole of Section 1 as currently
>
> written and replacing it with an Introduction that expands upon the
>
> Abstract as well as describing what the document will do. You would
>
> still want to add the use case descriptions.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1.1
>
>
>
> This section launches into a discussion of why we want a transport
>
> slice, but it does so before defining (section 3) what a transport slice
>
> actually is. The later paragraphs of this section are descriptive about
>
> transport slices, but are presumably not normative definitions.
>
>
>
> You may find it helpful to re-write this section in abstract terms. What
>
> behaviors are needed from the network? How is the network operated? How
>
> does this compare with "traditional" VPNs? In other words, don't mention
>
> Transport Slice in this section at all, but use this section to
>
> establish the need.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1.1
>
>
>
>    Transport slice is described as a construct that specifies
>
>    connectivity requirements, emphasizing on assurance of those
>
>    requirements.  Transport slice is unaware of the underlying
>
>    infrastructure connectivity (hence, the term "transport").
>
>
>
> Firstly, please avoid using passive voice. I think you are defining (in
>
> this not document) not running a commentary on the fact that someone
>
> somewhere describes "transport slice" in a particular way.
>
>
>
> More important, however, is what is going on here. It appears that you
>
> are describing a "transport slice as a service". This would be really
>
> helpful to state up front. That is, you are not describing how the
>
> transport slice is delivered by the network, nor any visibility that
>
> the client has of that network. Hence, "[the] transport slice if unaware
>
> of the underlying infrastructure connectivity".
>
>
>
> But this view as a "service" seems at odds with the quote in Section 3
>
> where you state that
>
>
>
>    "A transport slice is a logical network topology connecting a number
>
>    of endpoints with a set of shared or dedicated network resources,
>
>    that are used to satisfy specific Service Level Objectives (SLOs)".
>
>
>
> ...If the transport slice is unaware of the underlying infrastructure
>
> connectivity, how can the slice be a set of shared or dedicated network
>
> resources?
>
>
>
> I don't understand how you get to 'hence the term "transport"' from the
>
> lack of awareness of underlying infrastructure.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1.1
>
>
>
> Relation to Enhanced VPN. As you know, VPN+ is adopted TEAS work. I see
>
> that you have an Informative reference to draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn,
>
> but I also see that you never make use of this reference until the
>
> appendix. I think you need to discuss VPN+ in Section 1.1 to provide
>
> sufficient contrast and to explain why you need your new concept.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 1.1.
>
>
>
> The final paragraph in this section says "Transport slices relate to a
>
> more general topic of network slicing." It is hard to evaluate this
>
> without a more detailed description of network slicing than is provided
>
> in the single next sentence. In particular, we need to understand why
>
> you need the term "transport slice" instead of simply "network slice."
>
>
>
> I'd say you could go one of three ways:
>
> 1. Provide a more detailed description of network slicing in this
>
>    document
>
> 2. Make a normative reference to some other document that defines a
>
>    network slice
>
> 3. Remove this paragraph and clean the document so that the focus is
>
>    entirely on the definition of "transport slice" and no mention is
>
>    made of "network slicing".
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 2
>
>
>
> Trying to not nit-pick this section (it can be worked on later), but
>
> the terms SLI, SLO, and SLA seem to be fairly important within this
>
> document. These three brief paragraphs are not very much information
>
> for such key terms.
>
>
>
> You probably either need a section to go into more details of these
>
> definitions or you need external references to where these concepts are
>
> defined.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 3
>
>
>
> Why is the definition of a transport slice in quotes? Is it a definition
>
> taken from somewhere else?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 3
>
>
>
>    "Slice" refers to a set of characteristics that separate
>
>    one type of user-traffic from other types.
>
>
>
> Is "separation" a different term from "isolation"? They are often used
>
> as synonyms. If you mean them to be the same, it may help to use only
>
> one term in this document, but if you mean them to be different, it may
>
> help to provide some statement of contrast.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4
>
>
>
>    The following subsections describe the characteristics needed for
>
>    support of transport slices.
>
>
>
> "Characteristics" of what? "Needed" by whom?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1 (and elsewhere)
>
>
>
> The use of the term "end user" may not convey the message you intend.
>
> (Or maybe it does!) An end user is usually conceived to be a person or
>
> machine that it the ultimate source or sink of packet data. Do you
>
> define that the consumer/customer/client of a transport slice is such an
>
> individual person/component? Or is a transport slice provided as a
>
> service to support another network (like a pseudowire, VLAN, VPN, etc.)?
>
>
>
> If you plan to continue using "end user" you might include it in Section
>
> 5.1.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1
>
>
>
>    If for
>
>    example the range of latencies a network can provide is 50ms-100ms,
>
>    then this would be the range of values the end user should be able to
>
>    request, it would be as low as 50ms or as high as 100ms or anything
>
>    in between.
>
>
>
> Is this just a bad example, or is there something I am not seeing?
>
> Surely no one request a latency. They may indicate that they can
>
> tolerate a latency: that is, they may request an upper bound to the
>
> latency they will receive. If so, just because the network "can provide"
>
> latency of 50-100ms, does not restrict the user from giving a higher
>
> value.
>
>
>
> There is also some question of who asks and who provides. As you have it
>
> phrased, the network must tell the end user what is available, and the
>
> end user can then select. Is that really how it works? Doesn't latency
>
> in a network depend on many factors (including where the sources and
>
> destinations are, and what other service parameters are being
>
> delivered)? If so, wouldn't the end user make a request with a set of
>
> SLIs and the network would respond yes/no/negotiate?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1.1
>
>
>
> I'm not sure what this paragraph is doing here. If it were illustrative
>
> it might be acceptable but currently it has:
>
>
>
>    This document defines a minimal set of SLOs and later systems or
>
>    standards could extend this set and define more SLOs.  For example,
>
>    we included Guaranteed bandwidth which is the minimum requested
>
>    bandwidth for the transport slice.  The later standard might define
>
>    other SLOs related to bandwidth if needed.
>
>
>
> This document is not positioned as Standards Track, so this text looks
>
> very out of place.
>
>
>
> I do understand that is a transport slice is to be viewed as a service
>
> then it is important to qualify the service parameters. Is this the
>
> same list of service requirements as we find in section 3 of
>
> draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn? Are any differences the clue to
>
> understanding the difference between an enhanced VPN and a transport
>
> slice?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1.1
>
>
>
>    o  Availability: is defined as the ratio of uptime to
>
>       total_time(uptime+downtime), where uptime is the time the
>
>       transport slice is available in accordance with the SLOs
>
>       associated with it.
>
>
>
> There is some circuitous definition here since an SLO is "A target value
>
> or range of values for a service level that is measured by an SLI."
>
> You also need to indicate what you mean by "the transport slice is
>
> available"? Does the disconnection of one TSE from a slice mean the
>
> slice is not available, or just downgraded?
>
>
>
> (This may be a comment too far! It is probably off in the details that
>
> the WG might discuss if/when the document is adopted.)
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1.1
>
>
>
> Security : really?
>
>
>
> draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn has:
>
>
>
>    While an enhanced VPN service may be sold as offering encryption and
>
>    other security features as part of the service, customers would be
>
>    well advised to take responsibility for their own security
>
>    requirements themselves possibly by encrypting traffic before
>
>    handing it off to the service provider.
>
>
>
> Do you really believe that "encrypted connectivity" is likely to be an
>
> SLI of a transport slice?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 4.1.2
>
>
>
>    With these objectives incorporated, a customer sees transport slice
>
>    as a dedicated network for its exclusive use.
>
>
>
> Do you mean like a VPN? A sort of VPN with enhanced attributes? Like a
>
> sort of enhanced VPN?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Sections 4.2 and 4.3
>
>
>
> I didn't really understand how/why we need another decomposition of
>
> network services, network virtualisation, and hierarchical networks
>
> that is essentially functionally the same as many of the ones we have
>
> worked n before but which has a different set of names for things. Is
>
> there really a big difference between this and work we have done before?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 5.1
>
>
>
> I'm a bit confused by your statement (in the TSC definition) that there
>
> are different types of orchestrators and different types of TSC. There
>
> is no explanation of this and the definitions appear to be generic.
>
>
>
> If it is OK to have "slice operator for short" why is it not OK to
>
> have "slice" for short?
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> The only mention of the "e2e network slice orchestrator" is in Section
>
> 5.2.
>
>
>
> This seems to be related to some text in 5.1
>
>
>
>       A user may either directly manage its service
>
>       by interfacing with the transport slice controller or indirectly
>
>       through an orchestrator.
>
>
>
>    Orchestrator:  An orchestrator is an entity that composes different
>
>       services, resource and network requirements.  It interfaces with
>
>       the transport slice controllers.
>
>
>
> ...which is slightly in conflict with text in 5.
>
>
>
>    A transport slice is requested from an entity (such as an
>
>    orchestrator or a system-wide controller) performing broader service
>
>    or application specific functions.
>
>
>
> There is probably some unspoken meaning to these differences, but it is
>
> hard to guess.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> I consider the distinction in Section 6 between "end-to-end slice",
>
> "other slice", and "transport slice" to be somewhat bogus. The customer
>
> of an end-to-end slice might be directly using the "transport network".
>
> The IETF only deals with IETF technologies.
>
>
>
> ---
>
>
>
> Section 7 will need to filled in at some stage. At the least, you have a
>
> suggestion that security is an SLI. But probably, there are plenty of
>
> security and privacy concerns with all aspects of network slicing.
>
>
>
> *From:* Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of *Vishnu Pavan Beeram
> *Sent:* 19 August 2020 16:50
> *To:* TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
> *Cc:* TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
> *Subject:* [Teas] WG adoption - draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition
>
>
>
> All,
>
> This is start of a *three* week poll on making
> draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-03 a TEAS working group
> document.
> Please send email to the list indicating "yes/support" or "no/do not
> support". If indicating no, please state your reservations with the
> document. If yes, please also feel free to provide comments you'd
> like to see addressed once the document is a WG document.
>
> The poll ends September 9th (extra week to account for vacation season).
>
> Thanks,
> Pavan and Lou
>
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