Re: [Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: (with COMMENT)

Aijun Wang <wangaijun@tsinghua.org.cn> Mon, 18 January 2021 03:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: (with COMMENT)
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Hi, Erik:

Thanks for your review, will adopt your suggestion in next updated version.
Detail response inline below, begin with [WAJ].


Best Regards

Aijun Wang
China Telecom

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Subject: [Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on
draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: No Objection

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[[ nits ]]

[ section 3 ]

* s/The topology is comprises/The topology comprises/

  or

  s/The topology is comprises/The topology is composed of/

  I think.
[WAJ] Will use "The topology is composed of"

[ section 7.1 ]

* s/of the differentiate prefixes/of the different prefixes/?
[WAJ] Will use "differentiated". Here we want to emphasis that such prefixes
are used to differentiate the QoS performance of the application that
associated with them.



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