Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03.txt

Young,

     You're quick!  I'll take a look and follow up as needed.

WRT service mapping, do you want to respin the document now or address 
further alignment post adoption?

Thanks,

Lou

On 2/4/2019 2:16 PM, Leeyoung wrote:
> Hi Lou,
>
> Thanks for further comments on the VN Yang draft. The revision has been published (please see the attachment) with all your comments having been incorporated.
> Please let us know if this is good to go (and therefore, we can also move TE-service mapping draft to the WG poll); if not, please provide further comments.
>
> Thanks & Best regards,
> Young (on behalf of co-authors)
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net]
> Sent: Monday, February 4, 2019 6:30 AM
> To: Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com>; teas@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03.txt
>
> one correction below...
>
> On 2/3/2019 3:40 PM, Lou Berger wrote:
>> young/authors,
>>
>>        I think this is a good start.  My suggestions to finish what
>> you've started here and make the model and the document generally
>> applicable to any mode of VN operation
>>
>> 1) Do a global replace s/ACTN VN/VN/g
>>
>> 2) Reframe the informative material to to be focused on general VN
>> Operation and use ACTN as the primary example.  I think this mainly
>> impacts moving the 1st three paragraphs to later in the section an
>> stating that ACTN is an example (context).  It also make section 2 and
>> 3 need to be updated to state that ACTN is being used to illustrate
>> the general usage of the VN yang model.
>>
>> 3) container actn, ap as vn can be top level nodes.
>>
> 3) drop container actn, as ap and vn can be top level nodes (containers)
>
> Lou
>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Lou
>>
>> On 12/30/2018 11:20 PM, Leeyoung wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> This is to update per comments raised up in IETF 103 meeting to make this model applicable not only in an ACTN context but also in generic context outside of ACTN context as an independent VN model in and of itself.
>>>
>>> Please see the below diff pointer to see the difference from the previous version. Please let us know in case you have any question or comment.
>>>
>>> Thanks & Best regards,
>>> Young (on behalf of other co-authors)
>>>
>>>
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>>> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03.txt
>>>
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF.
>>>
>>>            Title           : A Yang Data Model for ACTN VN Operation
>>>            Authors         : Young Lee
>>>                              Dhruv Dhody
>>>                              Daniele Ceccarelli
>>>                              Igor Bryskin
>>>                              Bin Yeong Yoon
>>>                              Qin Wu
>>>                              Peter Park
>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03.txt
>>> 	Pages           : 54
>>> 	Date            : 2018-12-30
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>       This document provides a YANG data model for the Abstraction and
>>>       Control of Traffic Engineered (TE) networks (ACTN) Virtual Network
>>>       Service (VNS) operation.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/
>>>
>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-03
>>>
>>>
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