Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03.txt

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 16 November 2020 09:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03.txt
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Hi Adrian, Dan,

Let me take up ALTO.

4.1.5.  QUIC
4.1.11.  TE Extensions to the IGPs
4.1.14.  Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (Dhruv)
4.1.17.  Network Slicing
4.1.18.  Deterministic Networking
5.3.1.  Hybrid Systems
5.5.1.  Intent-Based Networking (Jeff recently mentioned he would provide
text)

Thanks,
Dhruv


On Mon, Nov 16, 2020 at 3:20 PM <daniel@olddog.co.uk> wrote:

> Hi Adrian,
>
> Thanks for the update during the (current) TEAS working meeting for the
> work:
>
> Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic Engineering
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03
>
> I will provide text for "5.3.2.  Considerations for Software Defined
> Networking".
>
> For the benefit of others, I have summerised the sections that require
> additional text contributions:
>
> 4.1.5.  QUIC
> 4.1.11.  TE Extensions to the IGPs
> 4.1.14.  Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
> 4.1.17.  Network Slicing
> 4.1.18.  Deterministic Networking
> 5.3.1.  Hybrid Systems
> 5.5.1.  Intent-Based Networking (Jeff recently mentioned he would provide
> text)
>
> BR, Dan.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel
> Sent: 16 November 2020 07:08
> To: teas@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03.txt
>
> Hey TEAS!
>
> I managed to carve out some more time for editorial cleaning.
>
> Reached section 5.3 so far.
>
> Still hoping some people will look at the empty sections (marked TBD) and
> supply text.
>
> Adrian
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03.txt
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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic
> Engineering
>         Author          : Adrian Farrel
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03.txt
>         Pages           : 75
>         Date            : 2020-11-15
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the principles of traffic engineering (TE) in
>    the Internet.  The document is intended to promote better
>    understanding of the issues surrounding traffic engineering in IP
>    networks and the networks that support IP networking, and to provide
>    a common basis for the development of traffic engineering
>    capabilities for the Internet.  The principles, architectures, and
>    methodologies for performance evaluation and performance optimization
>    of operational networks are also discussed.
>
>    This work was first published as RFC 3272 in May 2002.  This document
>    obsoletes RFC 3272 by making a complete update to bring the text in
>    line with best current practices for Internet traffic engineering and
>    to include references to the latest relevant work in the IETF.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-03
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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