Re: [Teas] 答复: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-yang-path-computation-18

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Hi Chaode,
Thanks for your review and comments.
See in line below our replies.
We have fixed most of the comments in github , see PR #111<https://github.com/rvilalta/ietf-te-path-computation/pull/111>

Thanks
Italo and Sergio (on behalf of other authors/contributors)

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of yuchaode
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To: 'Vishnu Pavan Beeram' <vishnupavan@gmail.com>; TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
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Subject: [Teas] 答复: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-yang-path-computation-18

Hi WG and chairs,

These are some comments from my side:

(1)     In section5, there may be an editorial error. It is mentioned in the document that, it defines a YANG RPC augments to tunnel-rpc which is defined in ietf-teas-yang-te. But according to the latest draft of TE tunnel, tunnel-rpc is removed. And the RPC are augmenting to tunnels-path-compute actually.
[Belotti, Sergio (Nokia - IT/Vimercate)] fixed


(2)     The examples provided in the appendix provides wrong URL. I think the URL should be  /restconf/operations/ietf-te:tunnels-path-compute, instead of /restconf/operations/ietf-te:te:tunnels-path-compute. There is a ':te' redundant in the example URL. Tunnel-path-compute is not defined under te root container.
[Belotti, Sergio (Nokia - IT/Vimercate)] fixed


(3)     Since there is no primary path and secondary path defined in path computation model, though I think  path computation model can support protected tunnel path computation, I still suggest to provide some examples in appendix for reference.
[Belotti, Sergio (Nokia - IT/Vimercate)] Agreed: to be added in #109<https://github.com/rvilalta/ietf-te-path-computation/issues/109> . We think it would be even better to have such an example both in this draft and in the TE tunnel model draft.

Thanks,
Chaode

发件人: Teas [mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Vishnu Pavan Beeram
发送时间: 2022年6月16日 20:49
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主题: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-yang-path-computation-18

We are extending the last call to June 24th to allow for a few more reviews.

-Pavan and Lou

On Tue, May 24, 2022 at 11:14 PM Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com<mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com>> wrote:
All,

This starts working group last call on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-path-computation/

Given the size of the document, this will be an extended
LC (3 weeks). The working group last call ends on June 14th.
Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Thank you,
Pavan and Lou