Re: [Teas] [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt
"Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Mon, 06 June 2016 06:52 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Teas] [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt
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Hi all, This version addresses the LC review comments from Acee Lindem and Daniele Ceccarelli. The main changes are: 1. The title is changed to "OSPF-TE Link Availability Extension for Links with Variable Discrete Bandwidth" 2. Rephrasing abstract, section 2 Overview, section 4 Security Considerations, and section 5 IANA Considerations. No technical changes, just text rephrasing. 3. Editorial changes through the document There's a Nit error which is not reported by the Nits check during the uploading stage, I found it only after completing the upload. I could fix it if required. BR, Amy (on behalf of co-authors) -----Original Message----- From: CCAMP [mailto:ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org Sent: Monday, June 06, 2016 2:40 PM To: i-d-announce@ietf.org Cc: ccamp@ietf.org Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane of the IETF. Title : OSPF-TE Link Availability Extension for Links with Variable Discrete Bandwidth Authors : Hao Long Min Ye Greg Mirsky Alessandro D'Alessandro Himanshu Shah Filename : draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05.txt Pages : 8 Date : 2016-06-05 Abstract: A network may contain links with variable discrete bandwidth, e.g., copper, radio, etc. The bandwidth of such links may change discretely in reaction to changing external environment. Availability is typically used for describing such links during network planning. This document introduces an optional ISCD Availability sub-TLV to extend the Open Shortest Path First (OSPF) Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) as defined in [RFC4203]. This extension can be used for route computation in a network that contains links with variable discrete bandwidth. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-05 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ CCAMP mailing list CCAMP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp
- Re: [Teas] [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-o… Yemin (Amy)
- Re: [Teas] [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-o… Daniele Ceccarelli