[Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 17 January 2021 03:05 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-15: No Objection

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[[ nits ]]

[ section 3 ]

* s/The topology is comprises/The topology comprises/

  or

  s/The topology is comprises/The topology is composed of/

  I think.

[ section 7.1 ]

* s/of the differentiate prefixes/of the different prefixes/?