Re: [Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03: (with COMMENT)

Harish Sitaraman <hsitaraman@juniper.net> Thu, 10 May 2018 05:32 UTC

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From: Harish Sitaraman <hsitaraman@juniper.net>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for the review comments. See inline [HS]...

On 5/9/18, 7:39 PM, "Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03: No Objection
    
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    COMMENT:
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    Most of my comments have already been made by others. I have only a couple of
    minor comments remaining:
    
    §1:
    -It seems kind of weird to mix "requirements" and "assumptions" in the same

[HS] We can remove the word "assumptions". It was decided to remove (as part of response to Alvaro's comments) the one reference at the end of section 3.2.

    list. - Item 4: The "MAY" seems like a statement of fact, not permission.

[HS] All the normative text in the requirements have been moved to lower case (response to Alvaro's comments).

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Harish