Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-sf-aware-topo-model

Hi Tom,

Thanks for pointing these out.
We will fix them in the next revision.
- Xufeng

On Tue, Mar 26, 2019 at 6:05 AM tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> wrote:

> Xufeng
>
> Some quirks.
>
> Introduction/Abstract do not mention support or lack thereof  for NMDA
> (which the IESG have been calling for).
>
> Introduction does not have a reference for YANG leaving the question of
> version number uncertain
>
> Terminology fails to reference RFC8174
>
> Expand on first use, perhaps in Terminology, is helpful - TOSCA, SF2LTP,
> SF2SF, SF2TTP, CSO
>
> yang-version 1 is rather limiting
>
> YANG import statements lack references (which YANG 1.1 allows)
>
> /       reference "TBD";/
>        reference "RFC XXXX - SF Aware TE Topology YANG Model"; /
>
>    module ietf-cso-dc
> no version
> no copyright
> no reference to the I-D
> no description clauses
> no reference clauses
> somewhat short of ready IMHO- I think that this needs a lot of work!
>
> IANA Considerations
>    RFC Ed.: In this section, replace all occurrences of 'XXXX' with the
>    actual RFC number (and remove this note).
> I suggest that this apply throughout the I-D and that the Note is placed
> at the start, before the Introduction (the RFC Editor are happy with
> just the one note)
>
> RFC6020 is a better reference for the IANA Considerations
>
>    [I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores]
> RFC8342
>
>    [I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams]
> RFC8340
>
>    [I-D.ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo]
> RFC8345
>
>      import ietf-actn-vn {
> does not appear in section 1.3
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Xufeng Liu" <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com>
> To: "TEAS WG" <teas@ietf.org>
> Sent: Saturday, March 23, 2019 12:02 PM
> Subject: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-sf-aware-topo-model
>
>
> > Current Status:
> >
> >   *  The updated revision -03 was posted on Mar 11, 2019:
> >
> >      > Editorial fixes.
> >
> > Open Issues:
> >
> >   *   None.
> >
> > Next Steps:
> >
> >   *  Update the document to align with the latest versions of
> >      referenced documents, including draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo,
> >      RFC8340, RFC8342, RFC8345, and RFC8459.
> >   *  Update the section of Security Considerations according to latest
> >      guidelines.
> >   *  Get further reviews.
> >   *  YANG doctor's review.
> >   *  Working Group Last Call after completing above.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > - Xufeng
> >
>
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