Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-yang-l3-te-topo

[Xufeng Liu <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thanks for reviewing and sorry about the errors. We have posted an updated
version https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-l3-te-topo-07, to
fix the errors about the augmentation description and to rephrase a couple
of sections to explain the relations between the related models and their
objects. Please let us know for anything that is not clear enough.

Thanks,
- Xufeng

On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 6:56 AM tom petch <[e-mail]> wrote:

> From: Teas <[e-mail]> on behalf of Xufeng Liu <
> [e-mail]>
> Sent: 21 April 2020 21:09
>
>
> Status update on draft-ietf-teas-yang-l3-te-topo
>
> Current Status:
>
>   *  The updated revision -06 was posted on March 8, 2020:
>      - Editorial changes.
>   *  Corordinated with ietf-eth-te-topology and ietf-te-mpls-tp-topo
>      for the augmentation of ietf-te-topology
>      - ietf-te-topology does not need to be changed.
>   *  Answered YANG doctor's review comments.
>
> Open Issues:
>
>   *   None.
>
> <tp>
>
> I started  to review this and have given up,  I cannot make sense of
> section 2, which I see as fundamental to understanding the I-D.
>  Thus
> The YANG modulues  ietf-l3-te-topology ...
> These two modules augment ietf-l3-te topology
> No they don't!  This augments
> ietf-l3-unicast-topology
> which is quite different and I find this confusion elsewhere in section
> two. Thus
> Relationship  between Layer 3 Topology and TE Topology
> Is that Layer 3 TE Topology or ietf-network-topology?  I think that many
> if not most  references to TE Topology are ambiguous and need clarifying -
> is the reference to Layer 3 TE Topology to  ietf-network-topology?
>
> Some of the words are quirky and this website is determined not to let me
> put them into an e-mail but here goes.
>
> modulues
> topoology
> moducment
> Local ink
>
> Tom Petch
> Next Steps:
>
>
>   *  Update the model to sync with the referenced models like
> draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-types if there are any changes.
>   *  Welcome further reviews and suggestions.
>   *  Working Group Last Call after completing the above.
>
> Thanks,
> - Xufeng
>