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Mon, 27 Apr 2020 16:29:11 +0000 From: tom petch To: Tarek Saad , "teas@ietf.org" CC: "draft-ietf-teas-yang-te@ietf.org" , "draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: TEAS WG Document Status Reports yang-te Thread-Index: AQHWHLD7X+wVyg3aY0iyxdcxOSsQ1Q== Date: Mon, 27 Apr 2020 16:29:11 +0000 Message-ID: References: In-Reply-To: Accept-Language: en-GB, en-US Content-Language: en-GB X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: msip_labels: MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_Enabled=true; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_Name=Juniper Business Use Only; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_Enabled=true; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_SiteId=bea78b3c-4cdb-4130-854a-1d193232e5f4; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_ContentBits=0; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_Method=Standard; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_ActionId=aef89fdd-ede3-4b72-bbf7-000001806389; MSIP_Label_9784d817-3396-4a4f-b60c-3ef6b345fe55_SetDate=2020-04-21T21:07:20Z; 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charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable MIME-Version: 1.0 X-OriginatorOrg: btconnect.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: 24fd30d2-7255-4b6c-95a0-08d7eac81e53 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 27 Apr 2020 16:29:11.8089 (UTC) X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: cf8853ed-96e5-465b-9185-806bfe185e30 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: xe2UKiaIbl6yKhG2fID0FwypDhffWcXBdK/jSrGWdTSFsrPPxZ2qQRo2CTpo5aG3sWryS0Q+IFmngVQq2k+YnQ== X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: DB7PR07MB5045 Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Teas] TEAS WG Document Status Reports yang-te X-BeenThere: teas@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling working group discussion list List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 27 Apr 2020 16:29:22 -0000 From: Teas on behalf of Tarek Saad =0A= Sent: 21 April 2020 22:39=0A= =0A= Below is status reports for the below documents.=0A= =0A= Regards,=0A= Tarek (for the document co-authors)=0A= =0A= =0A= 1. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-23=0A= Current Status:=0A= =0A= * Version -21 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments=0A= =0A= * Authors addressed all comments in version -23 (already uploaded).=0A= * Team meeting regularly to address open issues =96 tracked on https://= github.com/tsaad-dev/te/issues=0A= * Will publish new version -24 before asking for WGLC=0A= Open Issues:=0A= * None.=0A= Next Steps:.=0A= =0A= * Authors will followup with YANG Dr. to make sure no further comments= =0A= * Will request a Working Group Last Call after completing the above=0A= =0A= =0A= I think that there is quite a bit wrong with this I-D from an administrativ= e viewpoint some of which may be more debatable than others.=0A= =0A= It is VERRY BIGGG which makes it hard to digest which for me is not helped= by having 52 pages of uninterrupted tree diagram at the start (or is that = intended to discourage anyone from going further?). I see other authors ta= king two variations. One is to put the entire module tree diagram at the e= nd as an appendix. The other is to include bite size chunks with sections = of text. You sort of do that s.3 but for me there is too little tree diagr= am in those sections. Look for example at draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm whic= h is only 122 pages but which I think gets a better balance in its section = 6 of interspersing text with tree diagram and making it possible to follow.= =0A= =0A= Less debatably, =0A= - the prefix in the YANG does not match prefix in IANA Considerations.=0A= - the Security Considerations are out of date..=0A= - the device module would be better In a separate section=0A= - s.4 lists [4872] twice=0A= =0A= Tom Petch =0A= =0A= =0A= 2. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-11=0A= Current Status:=0A= =0A= * Version -10 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments=0A= =0A= * Authors published version -12 which addressed all outstanding comment= s=0A= * Authors followed up with YANG Dr. reviewer on closing comments=0A= Open Issues:=0A= =0A= * None=0A= Next Steps:=0A= =0A= * Proceed to WGLC=0A= =0A= =0A= 3. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-te-07=0A= Current Status:=0A= =0A= * Version -07 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments=0A= Open Issues:=0A= =0A= * Authors working on addressing YANG Dr. comments=0A= Next Steps:=0A= =0A= * Folllow-up with YANG Dr. reviewer to close on comments=0A= * Proceed to WGLC after addressing=0A= =0A= 4. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls=0A= Current Status:=0A= =0A= * Authors discussing augmentation of this module for MPLS-TP=0A= * A new module and model is expected=0A= Open Issues:=0A= =0A= * Close on MPLS-TP modeling=0A= Next Steps:=0A= =0A= * Publish a new revision=0A= * Ask for YANG Dr. review=0A= =0A= =0A=