[Teas] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-25

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Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-??
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2024-05-27
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to any

mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the document is appreciated.

The document is well written and understandable.


Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have been cleared by Rev. 25.

I list here the nits I found:

Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence)

Section 1.2 

this this document. (only one this is OK) 


The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2

afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is used.

Note. This is just a comment no action needed.