[Teas] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Teas] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)
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John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the high-quality document. One minor nit on Section 2.1, Network resources need to be allocated and dedicated for use by a specific network slice service, or they may be shared among multiple slice services. I don't think something "need[s] to be" allocated if it also "may be shared", right? s/need to/can/ seems like it would be right.
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