Re: [Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)

"Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com> Fri, 26 October 2018 15:38 UTC

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From: "Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <rgandhi@cisco.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Teas] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thank you for your review/comment.

Agree, we will re-order the first and second sections in the next revision.

Thanks,
Rakesh


On 2018-10-24, 5:07 PM, "Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com>; wrote:

    Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-teas-assoc-corouted-bidir-frr-06: No Objection
    
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    Thanks for the work on this!
    
    I just have one strictly editorial comment:
    
    I found it odd that the introduction doesn't occur until section 2.  I think
    section 1 would make more sense if I had had the context from the introduction
    when reading it.