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Subject: [Teas] Re: John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi, 

Good catch. Thanks, John. 

Fixed in the latest version of the I-D:

URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-10.txt
Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing/
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HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
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BR, Dan. 

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Subject: [Teas] John Scudder's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: No Objection

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Thanks for the high-quality document.

One minor nit on Section 2.1,

   Network resources need to be allocated and dedicated for use by a
   specific network slice service, or they may be shared among multiple
   slice services.

I don't think something "need[s] to be" allocated if it also "may be shared",
right? s/need to/can/ seems like it would be right.

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